Well a few weeks ago I came up with an idea and storyboarded it, ready to show to the rest of the group and get their opinions and input. The sequence followed a witch who was hunting down several of her other, old witchy friends for revenge.
However we all decided that it would be a good idea to think of more possible plots before we chose a particular one, most of our ideas included themes such as death, obsession, weddings, funerals, isolation, fairytales and other worlds. Eventually I thought about all of the ideas so far and kind of mushed them all together. The opening is as follows:
A man overhears some other villagers complimenting his wife, who is the most beautiful woman in that village and looks a bit like Snow White. He the sees his wife talking to another man, however it is purely innocent. He becomes jealous and protective over his wife. After this, he kills said man, and then his wife, using methods from the Brothers Grimm version of Snow White (seeing a theme emerging?). This all happens in flashback as he mourns over his dead wive's grave. He also thinks about the good times they had during the relationship.
I've yet to post our storyboard as it is not complete. We've been thinking about music and possibly a voice over rather than having people speaking in the actual scenes. Furthermore, we do not as of yet have a title, however we've done a mind map and we have a few concepts
Update: I have now written a script/ screenplay. There will be a voice over. I left out the title page and the regular screenplay structure and style, here it is:
Fade In:
GRAVEYARD INT. MIDDAY
Joe Bloggs is standing beside a grave reading the inscription, head slightly bent. He looks up. CAMERA ZOOMS IN ON OPEN EYE. A series of scenes follow during voice over.
MYSTERIOUS FEMALE VOICE
Here is the twisted tale
of how a pair came to ail
She had white skin, as pale as snow
Red lips and ebony hair, oh how her husband did know
Of how the others looked at her and
of oh how they stared at her
Of how beauty became their decline
in that bitter realm of ice
Have you ever heard the analogous story,
regarding the ruler of jealousy?
One day the ruler asked a friend
were they the fairest in the land?
To which the looking glass responded
“Alas, my leader, you come second in this province”
The ruler was incredulous
“Be you a liar? This is absolutely preposterous!”
“No magnificent ruler of great heights
There is another, she goes by the name of Snow White”
The leader then thrived madly
just to be the one of greatest
Beauty
JOE BLOGGS
That’ll teach you!
MYSTERIOUS FEMALE VOICE
And regrettably I have to tell you, dear listener
The crimson apple was poisoned dear listener
Snow White did not prevail.
CUT TO:
GRAVEYARD INT. MIDDAY
CAMERA ZOOMS away from Joe Bloggs’ open eye. One tear runs slowly down his cheek. He looks sorrowful. Joe Bloggs turns and walks away. It is revealed he had been watched as Female Joe Bloggs peers out from behind a tree. Meanwhile;
MYSTERIOUS FEMALE VOICE
At least not until she got her revenge,
Through being brought to life once again
Fade Out:
The End